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Oct 6, 2008 12:44:44 GMT -5
Post by lilybud202cr on Oct 6, 2008 12:44:44 GMT -5
Very deep Voice!!
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Oct 6, 2008 17:54:39 GMT -5
Post by voiceintheshadow on Oct 6, 2008 17:54:39 GMT -5
watching a little to much csi and without a trace the worst part is that it is true
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Oct 6, 2008 18:24:54 GMT -5
Post by Cynthiax3 on Oct 6, 2008 18:24:54 GMT -5
Aww.
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Oct 6, 2008 23:58:59 GMT -5
Post by lilybud202cr on Oct 6, 2008 23:58:59 GMT -5
Awww
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Oct 7, 2008 13:51:42 GMT -5
Post by Skyler on Oct 7, 2008 13:51:42 GMT -5
OMG!! I found a post from a LONG time ago that was one of Cynthias saying she didn't think she'd ever pass me on number of posts.
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Oct 7, 2008 22:11:44 GMT -5
Post by lilybud202cr on Oct 7, 2008 22:11:44 GMT -5
And she did!!!
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Oct 19, 2008 21:51:23 GMT -5
Post by voiceintheshadow on Oct 19, 2008 21:51:23 GMT -5
book lovers
to the unreader you are just stacks paper fulled with words that hold no passion or life in my hand i find creature coming to life i find a being with passion that make my hart beat sorrow that drives tears from my eyes horror that fulls my dreams and hope that lives with a turn of a page i live for that next page that next line that next word i find life on these lifeless paper fulled with words and I'll read them all until the very last word, the last page, until there is not more ill know this creature for being til end and i still read more
still working on it what do you think
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Oct 19, 2008 21:52:39 GMT -5
Post by Cynthiax3 on Oct 19, 2008 21:52:39 GMT -5
Looks good so far.
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Oct 19, 2008 21:53:52 GMT -5
Post by voiceintheshadow on Oct 19, 2008 21:53:52 GMT -5
the ending doesnt feel right just yet
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Oct 22, 2008 1:47:34 GMT -5
Post by lilybud202cr on Oct 22, 2008 1:47:34 GMT -5
I like it...
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Nov 26, 2008 0:08:07 GMT -5
Post by voiceintheshadow on Nov 26, 2008 0:08:07 GMT -5
the death of two lover she held him tight through midnights black became dawns early lite she held her lover tight throught he trable blight with the light upond the wind the last of his breath breathed a pond her breast as he fade from the light her lover gone she alone for all she love has breath it last has she watch him pass
snow
little white magic fulls the sky between earth and high only touching ground will a feathers touch until the wind grabs them up blows them up in long swirls tiny gust dancing magic that no one can touch
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Nov 26, 2008 9:52:24 GMT -5
Post by Cynthiax3 on Nov 26, 2008 9:52:24 GMT -5
Those are good.
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Nov 26, 2008 11:40:14 GMT -5
Post by SillyFyre on Nov 26, 2008 11:40:14 GMT -5
Those are really good Voice. I really should start writing my poems again.
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Nov 26, 2008 19:15:06 GMT -5
Post by lilybud202cr on Nov 26, 2008 19:15:06 GMT -5
Those are really awesome Voice!!
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Jan 28, 2009 1:20:03 GMT -5
Post by darkenedangel on Jan 28, 2009 1:20:03 GMT -5
Okay i'm going to post one or two of my poems, please tell me what you think.
Dawns' Lover I walk without a sound, I kill without a thought. I don't look behind, To see the pain i have wrought.
I don't see the sorrow in the face of the dead just condemption of past sins.
I don't see the false, I only see truths to see what has become of you since your youth.
I believe in justice and that in its self is a faith. I only wait until dawns' first life or until my one true lover saves me in this life.
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