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Post by Cynthiax3 on Aug 23, 2005 10:45:02 GMT -5
You better get writing girl. LOL
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Post by Skyler on Aug 23, 2005 11:38:41 GMT -5
I'll help you find it Silly!!
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Post by Corrinewentworth on Aug 23, 2005 17:15:06 GMT -5
The story is very good Destiny. I can't wait for more.
I have another story I could post. Well actually it's a romance novel I'm working on.It's sort of a Christian romance novel like those Love Inspired books by Steeple Hill. But it's still pretty good. It's the only other story I've got written. I've only gotten to chapter ten. I haven't wrote anything more. Would ya'll like me to post it?
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Post by Destiny on Aug 23, 2005 18:03:17 GMT -5
I would LOVE to read it!!!!!! Please do post it!!!!!!!!! hehe, ok I'll start writing some again U guys sure do know how to make a girl feel good ;D
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Post by SillyFyre on Aug 23, 2005 18:50:29 GMT -5
AAAA...sure do it again..grrr....man women Destiny your driving me crazy...LOL
(thouth for me that not to hard..lmao)
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Post by Ailenia on Aug 23, 2005 20:51:28 GMT -5
this is something I just wrote one day, it isn't part of a story or anything, though I guess when I wrote it I thought it might end up as such. I just never got around to filling in around it.
"A Kiss Goodbye" ...
He looked at her, his goddess, perfect soft skin and radiant golden hair. He leaned forward and took her hand in his, as he brought his other hand to her cheek to caress the satin skin lightly. She looked so tender, and innocent, barely tasting life. And now she lay in the almost too large bed, wasting away before him. He cursed the Gods as he sat there, his heart breaking. She looked up at him, the crystal clear blue eyes filled with trust and love. A soft smile crossed her full, rosy lips, and she whispered his name. "I love you" she breathed softly. He leaned down to press his lips gently to hers, as the tears ran down his cheeks. In her last moment, she looked into his eyes and felt his pain. "Please don't cry for my, my love, for now I live within thee." He wiped the tears from his cheek, as he lifted his lips from hers, and she was gone." Lyn Martin © 1-3-2003
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Post by Ailenia on Aug 23, 2005 20:58:05 GMT -5
and if you can bear the length of this, it's kind of long, and it was a nono, but I did not find out until AFTER I wrote it .. lol .. so I had to go back and change names, however, I didnt change the name of the lead character. Somehow I couldnt manage to do that being that she was my role play character, another thing I did not know I wasn't allowed to do, being I didnt know about her website until after I had the character for several months, Ah well .. live and learn. At any rate I hope you like the story. www.geocities.com/frog609/story1.html
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Post by SillyFyre on Aug 23, 2005 21:20:34 GMT -5
that was nice Ailenia, it would be nice ending or beggining to a story. Ok..here something that just jumped at me tonight. I hope you like it and yes there will be more. Soul Mates “WITCH! BURN THE WITCH!” The mob screams as they drag the young women though the small dark town. “No, I’m not a witch! Let me go! I’M NOT A WITCH!!!” But she knows they did not hear her or more like would not hear her. She tries with all her might to pull herself free of the two men that are dragging her in front of the mob. “DONOVAN!! DONOVAN!! PLASE, DONOVAN! DON’T LET THEM BURN ME! YOU KNOW I’M NOT A WITCH! DONONVAN!” “KATHERINE!!” a voice yells over the shouting. They young women tries with all her might to find the man she has grown to love and prays that he will save her, from the fate that a waits her. Finley she spots him as he pushes his way though the mob. “DONOVAN!” she screams as they throw her into the wooden cage in the center of the small town. Donovan dives for the cage door, only to be pulled back by a set of strong arms. “LET ME GO!” Donovan screams and he tries to fight of the arms off. “No, my son.” Donovan stops fighting and turns to look at the man he calls father. Anger glows in his eyes as he pulls his sword, ready to attack him. “This is all your doing isn’t it, father?” Donovan asks his sword in hand. His father never answers him but nods to the two men that had just lock Katherine in the wood cage. “NO!!!!! DONOVAN!!! DONOVAN!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAA……” Donovan turns round to see flames dancing over the wooden bars of Katherine cage. Donovan drops his sword diving for the now burning cage, but never makes it. The last thing he hears is Katherine’s scream of pain and then darkness.. ** Kat sits up with a start sweat running off her face as she turns and looks at the clock on her nightstand, it read 3 am. “Another nightmare, Kat?” the vice from the other side of the bedroom ask. Kat looks at her roommate as she swings her lags off her bed. “Ya, it that one were I’m throw in a cage and burn for being a witch.” Dawn just shakes her haed and rolls over and tries to go back to sleep. “Gee, thanks for caring, Dawn.” Kat said throwing one of her pillows at her. “Hey, I’m not the one whose having them, so why should I lose sleep over it.” Dawn answers throwing it back at Kat. Soon the two girls are laughing and throwing pillows back and forth between them. They are soon stop by the sound of the bedroom door opening. “Young ladies it is three in the morning, just what do you think you are doing?” “Sorry, Miss. Scott, Kat had that nightmare again. I was just trying to make her fell better.” Dawn said picking her pillow up off the floor. Miss. Scott looks at the two girls shakes her head and closes the door. Leaving them in the darkness of their room, again. Though the door they can her calling good night to them as she moves on down the hall to her own room. Both girls look at each other and bust out laughing. “Ok..I guess we should try and get back to sleep.” Kat said picking her pillow up off the floor. “Night Dawn, see ya in the morning.”
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Post by Cynthiax3 on Aug 24, 2005 9:42:23 GMT -5
Very good ladies.
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Post by SillyFyre on Aug 24, 2005 10:23:31 GMT -5
tks. I hope to have more posted tonight. If I live though today.
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Post by Skyler on Aug 24, 2005 16:57:20 GMT -5
Those are all good! Keep writing please!!
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Post by SillyFyre on Aug 24, 2005 19:21:32 GMT -5
what would you do if I said no skyler? LOL
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Post by Skyler on Aug 24, 2005 19:22:40 GMT -5
I'd cry.
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Post by SillyFyre on Aug 24, 2005 19:26:33 GMT -5
ok..I guess I should try and work on the story, then.
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Post by Skyler on Aug 24, 2005 19:29:26 GMT -5
Well if you want to be mean, as long as everyone else keeps writing, you don't have to.
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